Voilà, pour le cours d'Anglais, je dois décrire un endroit et j'ai choisi Poudlard. Le problème c'est que je fais parfois de bêtes fautes    
Voici mon texte :  
I’m in Scotland. I can see an enormous, not modern and a very old castle with a lot of towers. And it’s raised on rocs. In front of me, there is an enormous and very beautiful lake on which there are a lot of little ships with people who are holding lanterns.  
I can see to my right a big stadium where people are playing with balls on broomsticks and a little village. To my left, there is an old station and a lot of people with bags.  
Behind me, I can see a little hut where a very tall person wit a long beard lives and a dark, an enormous forest with a lot of monsters, like centaurs, giant spiders... I’m not alone… Next to me, there are people with black dresses and hats.  
 
Pouvez-vous m'aider ? Je vous remercie d'avance  

Poudlard c'est pas en Scotland c'est en Angleterre !

Ok ok... Mais tu n'as pas trouvé d'erreurs dans mon texte à part celle-ci ?

si :
 
I’m in Scotland. I can see an enormous, not modern and a very old castle with a lot of towers. And it’s raised on rocs. In front of me, there is an enormous and very beautiful lake on which there are a lot of little ships with people who are holding lanterns.  
I can see to my right a big stadium where people are playing with balls on broomsticks and a little village. To my left, there is an old station and a lot of people with bags.  
Behind me, I can see a little hut where a very tall person with a long beard lives and a dark, an enormous forest with a lot of monsters, like centaurs, giant spiders... I’m not alone… Next to me, there are people with black dresses and hats.
 
not modern = old, ça fait répétitif

Ok merci bcp

Je crois qu'on dit "on my right side" au lieu de "to my right". Et pareil pour "to my left"
Et "small ships" plutôt que "little ships" (me demande pas pourquoi ). Pareil pour "little hut". Je pense que c'est parce que little exprime une petite quantité et pas une petite taille.
 
and a dark, an enormous forest -> and a dark and enormous forest
 
 
pis tu devrais trouver des synonymes à enormous comme huge, gigantic, ...