Bonjour tout le monde, j'espère que vous allez bien, voilà je dois rendre pour demain cet essay que j'ai fait, pourriez vous me corriger les fautes s'il vous plait avant ce soir..
Je vous remercie d'avance.
 
What does the word " music" suggest to you?
(250 words)
 
For my part music is an art, an creative intuition playing on the time and emotion.
It stretchs out as a cultural practice. Music gather all the type of music and genre musical.  
 
 
Let us consider a survey was taken recently to determine the role of music in teenager's lives. This survey studied the listenning habits of 60 000 teenagers and showed that all places are good to listen music. For example 79 % listen to music while they are doing chores, 73 % on the computer , 72 % doing homework, 33 % eating meals at home, 18% in the classroom.
Besides, for example the most influences what are when they are listen to radio is 43 %, with friends it's 30 %, with TV with 7 %. A lot of type of music exist, we have hip hop, rap, pop, rock, punk, alternative, Christian, Gospel, R & B , Country, Techno, House, Jazz and others.
Let us take the example of this teenagers, 23 % enjoy hip-hop and Rap and whom 3 % are fond of jazz.
They do whithout music. It 's a spare time, a leisure because I m convinced that this lyrics, this melodie and rhythm is a source of pleasure. We cheer up and enable to erase tensions and stress about school and family problem.
 
 
I am 17 years old and for my part, my favourite style of music is pop and rock. My least favourite is Jazz and my favorite band are The Cramberries and Indochine and my favourite artist is Robbie Williams. I 'm convinced that music allows me to be in a good mood. It me soothes.
I love often the tastes of my friends because other type of music can be good. However, in my opinion, a lot of music which are of pop rock are excellent and I don't get tired of the music. For example, my friend Julie has been revealed her japanese music to me and it's very different of my tastes and yet I have some liked. All the same, I can like other type of music. As regards my boyfriend, he is keen on the same style of music than I like. Besides, he discovers me others artists or band that I Known very little because they are dead.
I haven't been influenced someone else's musical tastes because everyone to their own tastes. It's great that my friends llisten to the same music as me because me have interests in common. We can do to discover our a lot of things. We make ourselves understood. Nevertheless, if other friends haven't the same style as me, it's not solemn in the contrary we can make report that we can like other thing. Moreover, when I have friendly or love feelings toward somebody it's not because we have that the same style musical.
I known a lot of music thanks to my uncle because he enjoy pop rock also, unfortunately he dead 5 monts ago and he has given all their CDs and when I listen it, I remember special events that I forgot ever because I loved him and he was as a second father.
 
 
From my point of view, music is a source of pleasure, it allow to relax after, to be in a good mood. We can forget stress, tensions of the live daily. We are cheered up. I can't help thinking that it's a major role in the life. Besides, music remenber special events, souvenirs very touching and emotional.

juste un truc ; ya largement +250 mots là , non ?

En effet, il u en a 586 (word est mon ami )

 
J'ai relu rapidement, je corrige rapidement aussi, y a clairement des fautes qui sont passées ( vu que j'ai pas un super niveau en orthographe/grammaire écrite).
 
Mon avis après correction : ton anglais est clairement d'un très bon niveau si tu as rédigé ce texte seule. Par contre, tu dois fatalement avoir aussi un niveau correct en francais vu les phrases que tu essaies de traduire de facon littérale en anglais, et qui ne passent pas
 
Quand tu es justement face à un problème ou tu te dis "cette phrase, je vais la faire de facon littérale", arrête toi, et demandes-toi si tu ne peux pas bêtement formuler autrement ce que tu écris... et tu seras sûre de porter à la fois le même message et d'avoir beaucoup moins de fautes.
 
Si certains peuvent passer après moi pour corriger ce que j'ai loupé au saut du lit, ils sont les bienvenus

Je te remercie beaucoup pour ton aide et t' as entièrement raison c'est vrai qu'on ma souvent reproché enfin l'an dernier en première L  de vouloir dire des choses trop complexes et donc de traduire ces choses en anglais... On m'a dit d'essayer de faire des phrases simples mais ce n'est pas facile.. c'est souvent le vocabulaire qui me manque, là je l'ai fait avec mon dictionnaire donc ça va mais =(  j'ai dû mal en anglais ...en plus suis en L  =( et j'ai pas la moyenne lorsqu'on fait des type bac.. je fais beaucoup de fautes

Ah le dico, le pire ennemi du gars qui apprends une langue Le dico te donne la signification du mot, mais malheureusement pas comment et quand employer ce mot
 
Enfin bref, la ca passe bien. Effectivement tu as un bon niveau de vocabulaire ( avec dico ) , mais tu as quelques lacunes en grammaire/orthographe... vu que tu es en première, je dirai que tu te démerdes plutot bien. Ca veut dire quoi pour toi "avoir des problèmes" ? C'est quoi ta moyenne ?