Bonjour je voudrais juste que vous m'adiez a rendre ce texte le plus corecte possible, je parle de grammaticalement Merci d'avance
 
 
 
  I love you: these are the words I will always tell you. In spite of the fact that you choose to go no further, I still hoping I spend some time with you, just one more minute, juste the two of us. I still hoping that I am entitled to have another chance, that we start over. You told me that I would rather think about something else but I purely can't; I'm yours and my heart will always belong you.  How Can I describe how lucky I am: I went out with the most perfect women i've never known. Everything was perfect. We were so hoocked on each other. I used to make you smiling with jokes and my funny crazy side: you're loving it. We build together our love with icons like our song, our movie, our expressions. Everything was so perfect as a unbelievable love story.  

in spite of the fact that you choose not to go any further, i am still hoping i'll get to spend some time with you...i'm still hoping i can have another chance, that we can start over....my heart will always belong to you.....i've ever know...
 
là j'ai pas modifié ça mais: ya pas un souci de temps? tu utilises du passé puis du présent c'est pas super clair?
 
fixe bien les évènements dans une période et accorde en conséquence