bonjour a vous, voilà il y a un débat a faire en anglais et j'aimerai savoir si mon texte est correct (certainement pas vu mon niveau)
donc j'aimerai que vous m'aidiez a corriger mes fautes
je tiens a préciser que mon niveau d'anglais est faible    
 
Hello, I am john, an  veteran of vietnam war, and I am here to tell my story  . I was 20 years old when i was drafted to go to battle so I was very young man and not really ready.
I was scared has the idea of holding a gun to kill an human.
I killed my first person whith a bullet in the head the second week ,it was for me a strange feeling.I always have this mink.
I been hurt the second month, I received a shrapnel in my eye so , today I am a part blind. I was really nearly die.
Since I’m came back,I had nightmares who I see the person who I killed to stab me, it is very frightened.
Today I am also afraid of the noise of the planes,I believe to hear the bomber,with a simple firecraker, the memories return.
 
puisque c'est un débat, j'aimerai aussi avoir quelque expression d'oral qu'il serait judicieux d'utiliser, merci a vous.
 
 
 

merci pour le coup de main (y)
plus la peine de chercher, je suis passer aujourd'hui